Tommy's Tumbling Thoughts

A tale of bravery and ingenuity of a 10-year old, Tommy, who uses his peculiar ability of hearing thoughts to outsmart his sinister neighbors and save himself from a dangerous plot.
Rated Everyone 3 minutes read time
Psychological Horror
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Summary

Set in the neighbourhood of Fieldstone, the story follows a young boy, Tommy, who possesses an unusual ability to hear thoughts. This unruly power renders Tommy susceptible to mental chaos until he adapts to it by treating it like a puzzle. When he intercepts sinister thoughts from his new neighbors, it leads him to uncover a wicked plot against his life. As the looming danger draws closer, Tommy ingeniously tricks his neighbors by swapping himself with his teddy bear, thereby thwarting their malicious intentions. In the aftermath, Tommy opts to rest his power, relishing the newfound silence of his mind. Meanwhile, his teddy bear, Mr. Snuggles, bestowed with Tommy’s gift, continues the journey of deciphering the tumbling thoughts.

Once upon a time, in the not-so-generic neighborhood of Fieldstone, lived an equally not-so-generic boy, Tommy. With light brown hair, green eyes, and a small smattering of freckles across his face, Tommy might seem like an average ten-year-old. However, that couldn't be further from the truth, for Tommy had a peculiar ability. He could hear thoughts. Not mind-reading, rather, it was as if he could pick up frequencies on a radio, thoughts tumbling into his head like cascading water.

Tommy was just a baby when his parents first noticed something unique about him. He would start babbling in response to their thoughts. As he grew older, the gift became more potent; his world became a tumultuous sea of thoughts, ideas, and feelings of others, drowning his own psyche. It was overwhelming, even terrifying, especially since Tommy didn't know how to control it.

However, resilient as children often are, Tommy found a way to cope. He made a little game out of it, turning the jumble of thoughts into a riddle, solving which would essentially mean finding his way back to his own peace and quiet. Buddying with his teddy bear, Mr. Snuggles, Tommy would narrate the thoughts as stories, and together they would solve the riddles.

Everything changed the night Tommy's parents invited their strange new neighbours for supper. After dinner, as polite society dictated, the adults exchanged hollow pleasantries while Tommy was sent upstairs to play. No sooner had Tommy vivaciously bounded upstairs, that he heard a dark voice echo through his mind, 'It's time, get the boy.' The sinister resonance of the thought sent a bone-chilling shudder spiraling down into his small frame. Fear gripped Tommy, but he didn't falter. He held Mr. Snuggles tight and decided to solve this riddle.

The following weeks were a rollercoaster. Tailing his neighbors every other day, Tommy started picking up more of their thoughts. With each passing day, the sinister plot began to reveal itself, 'The moon will be full soon,' 'He is the chosen one.' Disturbing as these revelations were, they cemented Tommy's will to thwart whatever wicked designs his neighbors were concocting.

With each passing moment, the full moon drew nearer, their thoughts becoming darker. 'We'll devour his power during the sacrificial ceremony.' The night of the full moon, the riddle solved, sent shivers down Tommy's spine. With sheer determination in his heart, he embarked on a daring mission, a mission to save himself.

Leaning on the wisdom gleaned from countless detective stories, Tommy crafted a plan that was pure genius. He swapped Mr. Snuggles and himself, dressing up the teddy bear in his sleepwear. When his neighbors slithered into his room to kidnap him, they snatched up Mr. Snuggles instead. They were too entranced in their wicked ceremony to realize their mistake, and when they attempted to strip Tommy's powers, they imbued them on Mr. Snuggles instead.

In the chaos that followed, Tommy dashed out of his hiding spot, busting open the door and screaming, 'HELP!' As luck would have it, a patrolling cop car was passing by. The neighbors were apprehended, and under the gleaming moonlight, the neighborhood returned to its quiet charm, ignorant of the horrors that almost unfolded.

To cope with the monumental events, Tommy decided to give his gift a rest. He turned off the thoughts, enfolded in the comforting silence wrapping his mind. Now, Tommy could finally relax like a normal boy, and Mr. Snuggles, endowed with Tommy’s gift, continued the journey of hearing and riddling out tumbling thoughts.

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